My
Valentine
Valentine’s Day is celebrated on February 14
and many countries
around the world. It is a festival of love and many people
give chocolate,
flowers, cards, letters, teddy bear and present to their
girlfriend, boyfriend, friend and colleague. The symbols of Valentine’s Day are
hearts, red rose and Cupid. I think the Valentine’s Day is interesting and it
is good time. I have two reasons in do activity in Valentine’s Day.
One reason, Valentine’s Day is happy time and Family Day for me because
this year is Magha Puja Day. My family and I went to the temple for make merit,
pay respect to the Buddha and listen to sermon. I think, make merit makes
everyone know about doing well and exclude from malignance.
In addition, when
my family and I went to the temple, we feel peace and have more concentration
in make everything in daily life.
Two reason, I like to stay at my home in Valentine’s Day and I feel
happy when I rest. I do many activities; for example, use computer, reading
book or novel, took a nap, do homework, play with my pets, watch TV, talk joke
with my family and so on. Even, I did not a special thing but I feel happy and
enjoy when I stay at my home with my family.
From two reasons I said, in my point of view, Valentine it is good time
and Family Day for me. My family and I went to the temple for make merit.
It
makes us feel peace and have concentration. I like to do many activities with
my family at my home. I think everyone like Valentine’s Day and I hope everyone
happy in Valentine’s Day too.


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ReplyDeleteYour text is very interesting!!!♥ I like your text because it is good idea and organization. However,you have some wrong, and I have my idea to advice you. For example, I have two reasons of doing activities, My family and I went to the temple for making merit, paying respect to the Buddha, and listening to sermon. Thank you for sharing your idea♥
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