My good impression on the end of 2013 year and the New Year 2014



               New Year Day is a day for everybody happy and enjoy in this time. New Year Day, which is on January 1 and this holiday is celebrated in many counties worldwide. For me, I think it is Family Day because everybody lives together and I happy every time in this year.
               My good impression on the end of 2013 year is happy because I come back home at Ratchaburi and Kalasin but I come back home at Ratchaburi. I feel impression very much because my family and I live together. We make activities together; for example, wash cloths, fishing in canal, watch TV, cook food and so on. In the end day of 2013, we had dinner such as roast beef, sukiyaki, and broiled shrimp with watch TV. It is delicious but sukiyaki is spicy for me. I feel enjoy with my family in this year and we will sleep late at night. In the morning is the New Year 2014. My family come back home at Kalasin while my sister and I come back at Nakhon Pathom. We feel sad because my family and I don’t live together. I want New Year Day and long holiday arrived soon again.
                My good impression on the end of 2013 year and the New Year 2014 are live with my family every day. I happy and enjoy when I makes activity and rest with my family. I think everybody want to lives with your family in New Year Day like me.

Comments

  1. UnknownMarch 15, 2014 at 9:08 PM

    I think your story is very interesting for me.

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  2. UnknownMarch 15, 2014 at 10:15 PM

    I like your blogger.It make me know about activities the New Year's Day.You write correct in grammar.

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  3. UnknownMarch 15, 2014 at 10:25 PM

    I confuse about your tense.In my opinion,you should write in past tense. :D

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  4. UnknownMarch 17, 2014 at 11:04 PM

    You should use V2 for writing the events in the past.

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  5. UnknownMarch 21, 2014 at 9:09 AM

    Hello!!my friend♥ your activities is interesting and cute. I think you should use verb 2 in your writing because of the past event. Moreover, I would like you rewrite your introduction of writing to suggest your readers. However, I understand your text because it is clear although it has some wrong grammar. Fighting!!!♥ Thank you for your idea :-)

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